What's New

Taking beautiful nature in and appreciating it

What’s new is the charcoal swirls in the dusted grey sky, 

patterns rotating among the clouds

Glistening water droplets carefully 

placed along slim blades of golden field grasses
Crickets springing from one blade of grass to the other,

playfully chasing each other
Frogs covered in mud,

popping in and out of a frosted pond
What’s new are the observances we notice every day, 

in nature’s beautiful hues

Author's Note

What imagery comes to you? Any comments?

Reviews

[Adriancito Lupus Centen..]

You have got inspiration from nature, it´s pretty nice but sometimes a particular kind of writing. I would like to think on it like if your poetry were a painting. You must be a romantic painter trying on literature.

[Emily]

Thank you for your comment and thoughts.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful poetry.......
nature inspires some of the most creative and amazing works.......
profound expression.....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Emily]

Thank you. Yes, I find nature is a beautiful thing to write about.....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.........!!! :) :)

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

The last bit reads more like advice to the reader. Written outside the mind of the poem. I like the imagery in this because nature is inspiring even when it's not trying to be. If you left out the end two sentences this would read, to me mind you, as something incredible.

[Chris]

Our tones define so many things ...moments, places, people, life... and our words pencil in the heart.

[Dara]

Beautiful imagery that reminds us to take time "to smell the roses." I really love this.

[Emily]

I'm glad you like it, thank you.

[Rakesh Chauhan]

Five lines poem but beautyful emily .
Like your smyle