Slumber

Awake yet asleep

Soul lost in deep slumber

Trying to climb out of this darkness

Signs of light no longer visible to me

Numb, empty, hollow inside

Emotions lost, can’t tell how I feel

Gone inside

Just shoot me

I’m already dead

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

Great expressions from the heart indeed. Sometimes we need a miracle to deliver us and I am glad when can be delivered in our darkest moments.

[Emily]

Thank you for your review! (:

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome.

[Johnny]

Yes death is imagined to be like sleep to many... But if that is true what do dreams parallel?

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we can fall into a slumber of sadness and loneliness.
"Numb, empty, hollow inside
Emotions lost, can’t tell how I feel"
All of us feel like the above lines. We must find reasons and purpose to awake. Thank you Emily for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

I appreciate hearing your thoughts on my poem! Thanks for reading it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Emily]

Love thought last few lines!!!
Keep on writing!!

[Emily]

Thank you for your thoughts on my piece (: