Matthew

This is a second poem I wrote for my boyfriend for Christmas.

When I fell in love with you, 

I fell in love with the curve of your shoulders, 

The angles of your collar bones.

I fell in love with the colors in your eyes,

And the softness of your lips.

I fell in love with your cheekbones.

I fell in love with every eyelash.

I fell in love with everything.

...maybe I'm still falling...

Author's Note

Be nice. c:

Reviews

[Stanley Wilson]

excellent poem good descriptions

[Coyote Poetry]

No weakness in the amazing poetry. The good description allowed the reader to feel the desire and the strong emotion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kuro]

Although I've never had a boyfriend, this poem was particularly wonderful for me because it brought back memories of what it's like to fall so completely in love with someone. Beautiful work, Emily. :D

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Yeah....when you are in love you fall for everything....curve of the shoulders and their courage,
color of the eyes and their message,softness of the lips and its passion to get kissed....everything !!!!!
Good lines Emily....