Hidden

Lying

Deep beneath

An unsung hero

Calling out a name

Flashes of vibrant blue light

A distinguished magical force

Penetrates the ground

Deep beneath

Dying.

Reviews

[Shadows of Sight]

I really liked this. It reminded me of a scene from a superhero comic book, but with the emotional overtones of a powerfull speach.
This was verywell crafted! GReat Job! :)

[THE BLACK SEAL]

the short lines added a lot to it leaving me something to ponder on for the day

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I liked your poem. The way the lines are they seem to make what you wrote stand out. I really enjoyed it.