Untouched

Don't lose faith in me.
You were so sweet...
I'm sorry this is the way it has to be.
In my head your song's stuck on repeat.

I couldn't get attached.
My heart can't take no more lies,
Too many times it's been patched.
And my eyes are all out of cries.

I can't live forever.
Can I just take some time?
Lately I've been in the worst place ever...
But in time maybe you'll be mine..?

But how in the hell,
Did we end up like this?
Something I couldn't tell.
I just need that one first kiss.

I fell for you,
My butterfly.
I'll show you I'm true.
Please don't say goodbye...

Author's Note

I'm sorry..

Reviews

[Satan's Daughter]

Beautiful. Your sorrow is communicated in such an artful way that it's almost impossible not to feel that it has become your own. Well penned and thank you for sharing.

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Thank you.

[Lexi]

Really good. I loved it

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Thank you.

[Moon]

This is beautiful ! Desperate not to lose the one who you care deeply about .

[ℰmerald ⚓]

I care about her a lot, I don't know what I'd do if I lost her..

[Moon]

It sounds like you truely love her . She is lucky to have you .

[A Girl]

*Lose, not loose.

[ℰmerald ⚓]

thanks..

[A Girl]

I didn't mean that in a rude way. I make that mistake often myself, I was just givin' you a heads up :)

[ℰmerald ⚓]

ohkay thank you. :)

[xtheeverproject]

I like it a lot. It flows well and it's very emotional. The only thing is that some of the rhyming seems really natural and then some of it seems pretty forced... Kind of inconsistent, but you still did very well :)

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Thank you, sir.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda..]

awes who is this for, it really sweet

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

awes it okay hun don't feel bad

[Boy of the red]

fantastic poem. i enjoyed it very much. the use of rhyme is used well and symbolism is well put. goodjob

[ℰmerald ⚓]

thanks :)