yearn

i write this poem went i was looking for same thing, never really fine it in tell now :)

you can hear the wind in the trees but yet you cant't hear the crying out of a soul.

Soul yearn just like every other living thing is this world, they should never be a time in this lifetime when a soul has lost its way from the one you trust with  your soul. After a thing like this has happened to a soul it can never can come back from that.  Sure you tries to fix itself but yet you can't do it all alone. it takes the love of friends and family to help the soul fix itself. if that souls of your friends can't fix what has been broken it might take a person that has been more broken then yourself to fix each other. to walk the ever last aloneness of the 

Night

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

There's a lot of truth in this and I love the ending especially "if that souls of your friends can't fix what has been broken it might take a person that has been more broken then yourself to fix each other. to walk the ever last aloneness of the
Night" Such a beautiful ending

[poems with feeling]

that tha one came to me in a nightmater

[Chaos_Collector]

Yikes. I have yet to write any poems derived from nightmares, but I suppose it'd be a waste not use inspiration, wherever you may find it

[poems with feeling]

read the one life

[Chaos_Collector]

Okay, give me a moment

[poems with feeling]

k

[Eagle Cruagh]

---- to walk the ever last aloneness of the night.
Sad , melancholy, resignation .
The soul, solitary , transfixed in time and dependant
on friends and family for stability and purpose.
This is an exquisite piece. Created in a garden of
spiritual exhaustion---, but well on the circuit of
transfsion. Beautiful !

----- Eagle Cruagh

[astoundinglyattractive]

all you poems are very good, but i think you need to proofread them. i find it hard to read some of them and all.
but over all, this is a fantastic poem.

[poems with feeling]

ty guys dont't were im not going to stop

[cfix]

It takes a while to fix things.
I believe you will if you keep writing like this.
This is full of emotion.
Very well expressed!

[William Maisonave]

I think you have alot of potential...you're still young so keep at your craft and you'll get better and better as long as you stay true to your own voice.Look forward to seeing more