sweet love

Sweet tender of your lips

Sets my heart to beat

You’ve set your hands on my hips

Our body begins to heat

 

I stare into your eyes

Put your hands on my chess

Feel my heart inside

My love is more than less

 

For us are two

Never one a part

For I love you

Hear my racing heart

 

I glaze in the sky

To wish on a star

Hope our love will fly

We’ll never be far

 

Hold me near

I’ll hold for a kiss

Never have a falling tear

I’ll promise you’ll never miss

 

Stand next to me

You’re my sweet love

The one that could always be

For you’re my love from above

Reviews

[Ban Heo]

The sentiment behind this is nice. I like it overall but I feel like the 2nd to last stanza doesn't read as well as the other ones do. Good job.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :D

[Jordan's Back]

Very sensual sweet sexy and wonderful! Excellent Job!

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :/