All Because Of You

Listen to the breath of my heart

The beat of my soul

It’s all for you,

You’ve turned me gold.

 

My soul no longer echoes.

Eyes no longer rain.

Cause of you I’ve stepped

Out of the shade.

 

My mind no longer hates

My lips no longer curse.

All because of you,

All because of you!

Life no longer hurts.

 

 

Author's Note

Not my best work but it was what I was feeling at the moment.

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

Subtle yet poignant and sharp like a small blade.
For some reason it picked up pace from the second stanza
onwards and the second stanza stands out in an impressive way.
Reading your words you can almost feel the beat of someone's heart and the breath of someone in the reader's arms.

[bluessadmood]

this is so lovely..you had all that effect on me..
i see colors never seen before..i dream of worlds and see it like all magical
you made me feel everything in different looks and shapes
even the air around me smells nice ,a smell never used to it before
you enhanced every sense i me..i feel no end to what i could do and resolve
its all because of you..only you
lovely write..

[Alicante lullaby]

thisseemed to be lovefilled and love that covets you of all hate...

[Mauricio Montoya]

Very touching I like it, nice work.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Aww i like this
Great Job

[Mithridate]

i feel the emotion. good poem :)

[Bexfinch]

ahhh this is a heart felt poem it could be a Paramore song

[Alex W]

Very nice, maybe i'll find someone who makes me feel like that.

Until then, to the Rum! haha.

[C.J.G.]

So emotional. I can really feel it!

[Kristen]

So raw but beautiful, nice job!