But a drop of rain

Oh, if I were but a drop of rain

 which slid into your hand or

down your furrowed brow

I would saturate

myself into

the very

depth

of

you

Reviews

[Treble]

I love this poem! And I can tell that you like short and "pyramid" poems, so to speak. I love that! I also love how you tend to write about weather. I think that is brilliant. You are an excellent writer.

[The Watcher]

Short n' sweet, and I really like how you formatted the words till the end. This is really well written too! Kudos to you.

[EmpressPoetess]

Thank you! I truly appreciate your review!

[The Watcher]

You're very welcome!