Sweet music

 

You were a stranger one hour ago
before your smile caught my eye
my heart’s dancing in my breast
to my lover’s sweet melody

 

 

Your kisses are gentle love notes
your embrace, a groove I move to

You take me and give me love
I’m overwhelmed by it all
you have this power over me

             
Blessing me with tender moments

those only two lovers can share

I was an empty shell
until you loved me
and filled me with
love’s sweet music

Reviews

[Jibey]

There is a touching beauty about the way this is expressed... the image of the empty shell filled with the sweet music of love is warm and delightful... the melody, the notes, the groove all consonant with the concept... with the emotional pleasure carried along with that tender smile that feels so good...

[deeps]

This is so beautiful and wonderful, very well written.