Return love to me

A break up poem

Dark imprints of my sadness
shadowy flecks across my heart
once filled with happiness
until you broke it apart

Once overflowing with love,
misery now fills my cup
a mixture of pain and tears
I need love to fill it up.

I can see our bedroom silhouettes
soft prints where you used to lay
you nestled against my breast
as we whispered the night away.

Missing you is hurting me
And breaking my heart in two
You took away my fantasy
Now bring back all I gave to you.

Bring it back, give it back to me
Embrace me with in your arms again
All I want is what you took from me
Your tender love, minus the pain.

Reviews

[GTVile]

Ah, a rhyming poem. I'm afraid I just don't see enough of these nowadays. I love it. You paid attention to rhyme and didn't force it, and you gave it rhythmic flow. Very nice. I do think, however, that the last line could be arranged a bit differently, maybe "without" instead of "minus" but that's a personal preference. Overall, very, very good.

[Angel Veselinov]

Yeah live can be painful great piece nicely written poem Thanks for sharing

[Raivenne]

"Missing you is hurting me
And breaking my heart in two
You took away my fantasy
Now bring back all I gave to you."

I have lived those lines in my own way. A beautifully penned write.

[Nayan]

Wonderful write! I was engrossed as I read the lines...

Thanks so much for sharing :)

[Soul Magic✯]

"Bring it back, give it back to me
Embrace me with in your arms again
All I want is what you took from me
Your tender love, minus the pain." beautifully expressed. you flow so wonderfully in this piece.

[Frantzuu]

A very passionate poem, great job. The image fits it well too. :D

[Jibey]

Passionate and moving in its longing for physical and emotional satisfaction..