forever waiting

she's never really had much luck with love

always falling hard for people she can't have 

and later

getting her heart broken

but now

she's fallen hard

she's spoken to him

and she already says that

she adores him

but how will she get him?

she'll be forever waiting

waiting for some good luck for once

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The wait for love. Took me 36 years to find. I like the hope and the wish in the words. A nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Anahat]

nice this was...simple and full of emotions!
Keep writing :)

[Einstein Noodle]

we hope against hope don't we?! .. there seems to be no better way to find true love than being bounced again and again over rough terrain ..its the bleeding and the healing that teach .. ;}
ouchy!
E.

[Ma'at]

thank you x

[Amber Lily]

I lot of emotion running through this one. The feelings are clear and even though it's a shorter piece and impact is large.

[Lauren]

Forever waiting... this is how I feel... one of the saddest things there is I think. Great poem

[Ma'at]

thank you x

[Troy Henson]

Stranger things do happen. Patience is the key. Never give up.

[Ma'at]

thank you :)

[Matching Socks]

I think good things cone to good people. Just takes some time and patience, enjoy the moments. Savour them slowly. No need to rush.

[Ma'at]

thank you, i'll think about it x

[willweb]

You just never know when good luck may find you...it happens, I know. Nice one Daniela, I liked this alot.

[Laura Lynn]

yes, I totally agree with willweb and Ana Sophia, no need to rush, enjoy the moments, etc. We wait for chances and they make or break us, half the time we have no idea what we are in for even when we try to do the research, research is partially sexy, but we have to beware of bodily decay unfortunately which nobody wants to deal with quite

[Ma'at]

thank you x