When I close my eyes

When I close my eyes

A Poem by Broken Wings

When I close my eyes

All I that I can see

Is the bitterness

That lays within me.

 

When I close my eyes

All I can see

Is the God that ignores me.

 

When I close my eyes

All that I can see

Is the inside of my eyelids

© 2012 Broken Wings


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Zak
Hah! What a wonderful truth! I like how you've taken such a simple thing that you do and used it to relay such a simple truth. You worked these words well.
Could you write an extension?

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Broken Wings

Minot , ND



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