If I could

If I could

A Poem by Broken Wings

If I could

I would fly away.

If I could

I would die today.

I would forget

All of my sorrows,

I would forget

All my pain

And gladly enter

Death's forever domain.

© 2012 Broken Wings


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not many words, but yet still powerful. I like the last two lines. Nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow, loved the last line, this poem has a great meaning behind it....we all wish to be different or better...but that's how life is o.o sometimes we should just pause and be thankful for what we have...cause the cup is half full =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Broken Wings

Minot , ND



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