Ringing

A Poem by Broken Wings

I dial the phone

Ring ring ring

Will he answer

What to say

Ring ring ring

Hang up now before

Wait maybe it's ok

Ring ring ring

Just his voicemail

I miss his voice

Ring ring ring

Hello; what do I say

© 2012 Broken Wings

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Meaghan Rhymer

I like this piece! I would look to varying the placement of the "ring ring ring" in the stanzas instead of relying on it staying in the middle. I also liked the use of a modified rhyme scheme here! Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Canicus

It's very easy to tell that he makes you nervous in this. Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 2, 2012
Last Updated on February 2, 2012

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Broken Wings

Minot , ND

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Hey umm I'm courtney. I'm one of those that no matter how many times you tell her she's pretty she won't believe it. Well on here no one knows me so I can put my heart out there. I feel music, writing.. more..