Fading Thoughts

Poem

Fading Thoughts

Searching through the memories  in my mind,
Looking for a place called home.
Digging, delving, sifting, scanning,
Files flipping with my thoughts
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Somewhere there must be something hiding deep,
A file that fits the search.
Days of thinking, hours of thoughts,
Nothing seems to fit the spot.
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Fading memories washed with constant thoughts,
Try to make them new again.
Yesterday's years, tomorrow's dreams,
Must be hiding somewhere deep.
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In years gone by and times to come,
Time will walk by slow.
Seasons come and seasons go,
Will start a file and fill it slow.

Author's Note

I have no idea what I am doing,
Please be gentle with my thoughts

Reviews

[Lexi-Lu]

"In years gone by and times to come,
Time will walk by slow.
Seasons come and seasons go,
Will start a file and fill it slow."

-This was my favorite stanza, and I think it really captured the whole point of your poem. :)

[Erana]

Thank you so much again for those kind words
~E

[BennyBooth]

I have no idea either but i am doing it just like yourself. I think it is wonderful and keep doing what you are doing. I can feel as I read so it is good.... Nice work

[Starbuck]

Beautiful. Home is where the heart is, so this one evokes longing and deep sadness.