I Am Gone

i just need to vent some stuff... I have been working on a few things and this one just came to me

In the silence I wait alone
In the dark I have no home
All I used to be is broken
So much I feel, unspoken

Inside I hear this screaming
Living life with no meaning
Not a pain that you could know
With a blade I tried to show

In my blood I write to you
Understand now, I am through
Can only fight for so long
Until one day I am gone

Author's Note

just what you think
i do not care about spelling grammar etc
thank you in advance

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

I like it. Nice flow and easy to relate to. I like the first stanza.. the broken part reminds me of how we sometimes have to kill the old to start anew. The second is just the right intensity to move the reader forward... and a glimpse into the frustration of futile communication... and a whole lot more... the last one, a perfect ending of the inevitability of us all... or is it?
Yep... much to chew on... excellent piece.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

I really like this piece. Very captivation and imaginative. A great piece!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Intense, one word to describe it. yes, I have been there a few imes too; suicidal, not wnting to live. this is very emotional, and invokes many emotions in me. I think you did well. Thanks for sharing.

Kena

[Sarah]

Wow, very dark, and written eloquently and with an unforced rhyme so that the form itself isn't distracting. Like how this came out - great job!