Quench

It is passionate romance
that quenches my thirst;

even in a time of drought.
I can get by with just your love.

Your kisses once poured down upon me
like a life changing rain,

and now your affection cannot come even close
to filling a Dixie Cup.

My heart becomes desirous, and dry.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think. Thank you.

Reviews

[just is]

I love it, wonderful write

[FireFly]

Ouch/: your emotion is very evident here. well done!

[—-]

excellent. sacrifice is alive in your dry-heaving heart, i like the economical use of words and the almost removed feeling. well done. :)

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful and heart wrenching words.