The mirror and I

In conversation with the mirror.

I see inspiration and
I see truth.
I see some pain and
I see ruth.
I see love and
I see dark.
I see snow and
I see sparks.
I see the forbidden and
I see clear.
I see forgiveness and
I see fear.
I see dungeons and
I see valleys.
I see terror and
I see a need to gally.
I see the moon and
I see the stars.
I see beautiful places and
I see forgotten scars.
I see night and
I see day.
I see strong and
I see cray.
I see happy and
I see sad.
I see everything you've ever had.
I see me and i see you.
I see a mirror painted in hue.

Author's Note

Just a simple and sweet attempt at poetry. After a long time, I've finally gained the courage to write. Do tell me if you like it!

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"I see happy and
I see sad.
I see everything you've ever had..."

Thought provoking lines you've come up with. You surely wrote this piece with free-mind. Happiest & saddest days're the ones which enter everyone's life, for no reason. Dealing with 'em is what one has to look through. I kinda like the inspiration that you're even inspired with. Seemed, your inspiration's you.. yourself. Nice imagery! I'd be looking forward to reading your work!

[Esha Kohli]

Yes, i think all the phasesof life are necessary , even the pain. Especially the pain, it changes us in so many ways, good and bad ways! And also, one must always be inspiring, if not to anyone else, then themselves! Thanks alot ! Keep coming back :)

[Adam Adams]

Your reply's kinda full of insights itself. Quite interesting! It's certainly a pain that gets stuck deep into the flesh of heart for long & tease it in guise of bringing it... some remarkable memories/moments. It always depends on one how one wants to get through all of these thrones & especially where.. he wishes to reach to. I'm pretty sure.. would be around your pages!

[Esha Kohli]

Haha, well yes! You're right. When we finally go through it all by ourselves, we grow! Thanks a lot!

[Kshitij Srivastava]

As you mentioned, simple and sweet. I quite liked the warm and easy flow of the rhymes although I wished there were lesser ands at the end of lines. Thanks for sharing, keep posting ☺

[Esha Kohli]

Thankyou so much for honest review. I thought the ands gave it an informal tone. But i appreciate ! Keep reading! ☺

[Esha Kohli]

*for your honest review

[Kshitij Srivastava]

Ok, yes I do understand your pov.
Sure thing that. 👍