Cold Air and Colder Throats

You are the pauses
In between breathing and the
Regret to breathe out

I am the stranger
Who let you escape my lungs
And I died that night

- Etched In Colour

Reviews

[Grace Catherine C.]

In just six lines youre able to convey a solid idea and a very powerful image, well done.

[Bob Sherunkle]

Wow,Short and sweet.Just goes to show you dont have to write lines and lines and lines to make an impact.Brilliant.