The dream I see in your eyes

I see a dream in your eyes;

Deep, strong, promising;

Wandering like a ghost;

Lost, blind, mute;

Searching for directions;

And it does not know;

How to find it's way;

And it does not know;

How to see it;

And it does not know;

How to hear it;

And it does not know;

How to feel it;

Standing still;

Like a statue;

With no movement;

But hands full of hope.

Author's Note

It took me 10 min. to write this.

Reviews

[kij143]

I like how every line in this poem, ends witha semicolin (;)
Except for the very last one, its like one long run-on sentence, its actually pretty cool(:
It sort of reminds me of a little child, lost but hopefull. Good job! keep writing(: