I Never...

I never looked at the sky with such a delight,

but then he was beside me.

I never listened the waves with such curiosity,
but then we were near the sea.

I never thought that a falling star can make a wish come true,
but then I realized I was wrong.

I never thought that I could love a stranger,
and now I'm reminded of him by every song.

Reviews

[Claude]

What a touching piece of togetherness. I love the structure of first line alone, second line together. Terrific examples of experiences too. Well done!

[Nothing Personal]

Oh i like your style. You bring this apparently ideas together and then fit them in. And more importantly, the deep romanticism in this work is appalling. Great job

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was so beautiful! It reminded me of a song!

[Laureeann]

This is so beautiful

[Wondering Mind]

that last verse gives the feel of love at long distance- I think
Love remains undefined.

[Pax Analog]

Elegantly minimal reminder of the mysterious power of the unknown, and its amorous agents.

Love, the strange wonder, travels to the beat of its own drum, moves enigmatically.

Fine poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A falling star can allow us to have more hope and allow a door to open. The ocean create peace. A beautiful poem. The old memories and music are what keep us content and leave us with pleasure thoughts. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Dani]

Hah, awh :) This is sweet. And that picture is really awesome!
Good write.