Broken

A Poem by Jess

English project, 2008.

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Crashes; screaming
Voices swirl around me.
Their echoes sustain my terror.
Tears fall.

© 2009 Jess

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-WolfReaper (NERV)

Very short but to much emotion. Well done, jess.
"Voices swirl around me.
Their echoes sustain my terror."
Fav lines.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Short, but very powerful
"Voices swirl around me.
Their echoes sustain my terror.
Tears fall."
I love these three lines which speak much of your dark and deep emotions - desperation
Nice write
Love it
~Kavish~

Posted 16 Years Ago

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I'm 17, and I love poetry. I'm looking for constructive criticism. I write when I'm inspired, or just when the words form, so I don't know how often I'll add. more..