Lost

song lyrics that I couldn't finish so i decided they would just be a poem here

Lost leave me all alone
Lost left  on my own
Lost with no who cares
Lost something so many share
 
Am I the only to feel lost and alone
And chilled to the bone
Left on my own
Lost 
Tossed aside
And denied a second chance
And trapped in trance alone
So many doors slammed in my face
So many times I've been yelled at and called a disgrace
 
Lost leave me all alone
Lost left on my own
Lost with no one who cares
Lost trapped with some many others who feelings I share
 
How do I find the way out
I scream yell and shout 
But I doubt 
That It will ever change
You and the things you do to make 
Me lost
slam another door in my face 
Scream in my ears I'm a f*****g disgrace
 
Lost leave me all alone
Lost left on my own
Lost with no one who  cares
Lost trapped with some many others who feelings I share

Author's Note

again this is somewhat not a finished work

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this really captures some deep and powerful emotions in this piece! I like it a lot since it seems so realistic! I really do like reading poetry that gets the reader's attention by tugging their heart with either depressing or romantic words! In your case, it's depressing of course. Haha. This is great, keep writing! :D


Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Brielle Cartny]

This is great! It's how i feel sometimes when things just never seem to go correctly!