Death on my mind

another poem inspired by the senior's death this one talking about how it just messed with my head for the rest of the day

Sadly death is on my mind
sadly death is all i can find
a live lost
my mind clouded
shrouded with death
the creeping breath
all that is obvious
all on my brain
yet i know I'm somewhat far from insane
yet full of pain
not for he who is dead
I'm sad for his friends
that will slowly weep in  bed
those that will laugh
those that will cry
those that will deny
those that will try
to hide sadness
in the facade
the smile
full of sorrow
a pitiful masquerade
for them
i am truly sorry for there loss
and for them i am sorry
for them i wrote this

Author's Note

i feel more sorry for the dead's loved one then for the dead themselves

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

excellent, full of emotion...........

[Robert delfuego or Ethan]

thank you