More Than Just Words

Don't just read, feel..

My pen carresses the paper,
Offering sweet compliments and words,
It whispers gentle phrases of desire,
As gentle a touch as a bird,

A lovingly touch, the paper embraces,
And gathers the passionate admirations,
And displays them proudly upon her skin,
Basking in the wonderous sensations,

As others pass and see her now,
Throughout her entirety the words that are woven,
They smile as they grasp the beauty in words,
Full of compassion and emotion,

For words are much more than a deffinate fact,
They are feelings concealed within shapes,
A picture we see without eyes,
Of another world they conjure and create.


~Eve Rosehill

Reviews

[Somebrownnerd]

Eva, this was a pleasant read. I enjoyed the descriptiveness, and the way you conveyed the importance of words. I think we all can relate in that experience, there is a peace of mind associated with it. Again, wonderful write.

-Z.

[Eva Rosehill]

Thank you, I am glad you can relate to my work and that you enjoyed it.

[L.L. Lily]

Nice poem, thanks for the review too! The words that flows in the poem is indeed more than just words. You're passion in writing poems are shows and it's a splendid skill. Keep up the good work. It also reminds me of a childhood song (More Than Words) so reading it was a bliss :)

[Eva Rosehill]

I am glad I could recall such memories, thank you for your kind words..

[Maskedthoughts]

I love the beauty and flow of is poem, I don't know how to describe it, just very well done!

[Eva Rosehill]

Thank you, I will be sure to read some of your work and return the kind words.

[Distantview123]

The beauty and wonder of the written word can indeed be great. The imagination is given free reign, and a good writer can take the reader on a magical journey! Nicely written.

[Eva Rosehill]

Thank you! Great minds think alike..

[Stella Armour]

we would never be able to express our feelings without the wonder of words...

[Eva Rosehill]

Very true, they are a gift...

[Ankit Mahar]

Yeah true .Words are more than a definite fact .A lovely poem Eva .Keep writing

[Eva Rosehill]

Thank you, I am glad you understand my work, and I will continue!

[Ankit Mahar]

You are welcome :-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, words create a picture, but one we see in our mind's eye, not with the actual eyes. Good rhyming in this one. I liked it. Lydi**

[Eva Rosehill]

I am glad you did Lydia! For such a writer as yourself to admire my work is an honour.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...")

[Eva Rosehill]

Thank you for the kinds words, I appreciate them!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)