The Cosmos of all souls

just a lyric that went inside this sometimes-empty head

Sitting on this chair
I look out the window...
what do I see?
(I see myself)

Watching trees burn down
through this transparent glass,
I see myself
(killing me)

They say it's enough
to wake up in the morning
but when I open my eyes,
I see more reasons to be grieving.

I dipped my fingers on the calm lake
Rippling my reflection.
What did I see?

I say I saw an angel
dripping blood,
fallen grace.

But I saw nothing,
just a reflection
of a passing life.
-
a useless bullet
of a dying man

You see,
to destroy nature
does not only mean
to obliterate our future
but
it also means
erasing our past
leaving nothing
but the
unfinished
ignorant
present

Reviews

[GodzillaGirl101]

Phenomenal. Love these nature poems

[Grey Evanescent]

Thanks for the review girl :)

[Weeping willow]

Very good message for all to remember,life is the world we live on.We die,she'll survive without us.Carrying a better place engulfing new life and forgetting about mankind.

[Grey Evanescent]

Thank you weeping willow. 😊

[Percy Pound]

Great work! Keep it up! Great use of italics and bold-ing.

[Grey Evanescent]

thanks Percy Bysshe Pound, whew what a name.
I really appreciate your reviews :D

[Philip Muls]

A nice protest against the destruction of nature impacting not only the future but also the past. Love it.

[Grey Evanescent]

Thank you so much for the kind review :)

[Prantik Ali]

Whoa great work man!!!
Ur soooo good at writing poems!!!
Loved the ending :)

[Grey Evanescent]

Thanks man :)
I really appreciate your reviews.