27th. 8. 2014: The promise

27th. August. 2014

Once, a promise..

Stronger, kinder and wiser..

A silent seeker..

Today, a creed..

Tenacious, gracious and sagest..

A singing sophist..

Reviews

[Iam-me]

Wow, Eve. You sure do kick a*s.

[Iam-me]

In a good way not bad I mean, with this poem of I course. I meant to add before

[Einstein Noodle]

a singing sophist eh!? love your wry and sarcastic humor :) what a journey your poem speaks of .. from promise to creed ... your speaker growing some admirable qualities in their conviction ... then breaks into clever reasoning song ...showing the errors of his ways ... what a fine poem .. lots of "stuff" in it... my cup of tea for sure
E.

[angel]

Sing on, Eve...let the world hear the song your experiences have produced.

[Crowley]

Sounds like a time of decision and change that came about in a quite remarkable way. Kudos to you if it was you or someone you know. to make those changes takes heart and conviction and then to realize in writing like this is sublime! Loved it!