Notes

Your green eyes,

Fill my heart with joy, 

Your lively smile,

Brings a laugh from my lips

With your easy humor

And loving gestures

Music shall come 

From your family

As our strings ring,

the power of the notes come through

We are walking in the Fields of Gold

And marching through St. Charles Avenue

The simple sound of your voice,

Quiets the room

As you reach for your wand,

Our breath catches in our chests

Vibrato sweetly echoes, 

In a silky melody

Our magic

Is the best kind of all

True and pure,

We are far from perfect, 

Yet your baton still waves

With an occasional grin

You took us far,

To the beautiful streets of Savannah,

And the stage

Where we reached excellence

We miss you

Thank you for everything you have given us.

Author's Note

She has been sick for 3 weeks with pneumonia and is currently in the hospital. My prayers are with her and we all hope for her swift return to health.

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

I pray for her health too. Its so sad when a friend or family member falls ill. And its even worse when we're forced to sit on the sidelines and are unable to do anything.

Wonderful. Keep writing.

[MaddyHi]

thats so nice!! I love how its a very unique, calm, little peom! Nice job!

[Andrew Wright]

Oh, my heart... Wonderful.

[imawriter]

To the beautiful streets of Savannah============ah.... not everyone would get this.. but that one line evoked all sorts of beautiful images in my mind. Savannah is sooo beautiful. All that aside, music calms the savage beast and this poem is music too.

[Antonio Valentino]

What more could one ask for then this kind gesture, written very well, I'm sure she loved it.

Nicely done, I hope she gets better soon.

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a lovely ode..hope shes better soon.

[Linear]

You expressed a loving concern throughout this piece of literary art, very well done :O)

[Shiningwolf]

I hope she gets to feeling better and also, very good piece.

[Ashley.M.E]

It is always a joy to read poems and stories for others. I hope things work out for the best. It is always hard to hear news such as that. It was a great poem and I am sure it would bring her to tears to read, to show how much you care. Words like these in my view are one of the best gifts you can give next to life.

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope she is feeling better. I put her in my prayers. A beautiful and positive poem for a good person. I like the description and story in the words. I hope for a good ending.
Coyote