Spread My Wings

I jumped through hoops

I smiled and lied

I never yelled

I never cried

I never thought 

I never quit

I never wanted

More that this

But, now that’s changed

I’ve seen the truth

I know now

It was you who stole my youth

I won’t stand here anymore

Like your personal puppet on a string

It’s time for me to spread my wings

Despite of everything

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

That was too deep and strong
May you would always remain the same way

Lovely read!

[SoakedPoet]

very rhythmic... sounds kind of song like.. 100pnts!!

[Traci]

This was a lovely piece, a reflection of self, a strong heart and mind. Letting go is one of the hardest things to do.

[GwenLark]

Simply wonderful Evelynn.
So many great lines. Very memorable

[Avia]

Wow. Very nice expression of feelings

[Relic]

The heart and mind can only take so much before it says...that's enough and moves on.

Nice writing. :)

[Weeping willow]

Wonderfully expressed,moving on in a better direction;-]

[Evelynn]

Thank you!