Still

I can still see your smile

When I close my eyes

I can still hear your voice

And it gives me butterflies

I still feel your arms

The way they wrapped around me 

I still feel my heart race

As I let myself believe

That we could be more than this

That we could be more than friends

But I know that it won’t happen

And that I won’t get my happy end

I still see your eyes

But they're looking at her

I still see the kiss

Then my world starts to blur 

Reviews

[Mishti]

So intense emotions yet expressed in so simple words..

[Evelynn]

Thank you!

[Taino]

The memories, the longing, hope mixed with reality, the hardships of loving one as you described so beautifully, can send the heart into such a spiral. To see that which you love so much now with another is so full of emotions that I could not do it's description justice but you have. Very well done!

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much!

[i am LiLy]

I really like this.....so good to feel the connection and experience with the feelings in my own life....top writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A gentle and wonderful journey in your words. You made the reader believe your words and thoughts. I liked the honest tone and strong ending. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Avia]

Beautiful. This pulled some heartstrings. Very nice :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Heart wrenching. I can feel the emotions you wrote. This is seriously very beautifully written. Well done. Simply loved it.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

still nice and i love it thanks for sharing the talent you have.

[Lily Calico]

Ah, so emotional. I love the rhythm and rhyming. Not more than a few words wasted.

[Sam]

I really enjoyed reading your poem. You had such great emotion and meaning which you easily tied together with the rest of your poem. Keep up the good work!