Riding Feelings

Riding feelings

embrace my soul

in their rugged arms.

A beating heart races

in time with

the steady gallop.

I come closer

to something

but far away from

something else.

Where do I go?

I move with the wind,

feel the current

lifting my body

with it.

I do what feels right.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I do what feels right.
Nice write.

[Ruth]

This is pure energy, really loved it!
Every line, perfect flow xo

[Inyourshadow]

I was expecting something naughty lol, great imagery throughout and I loved the way the heart beat racing imitates the galloping hooves, very creative. Keep em coming Eve

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

this makes me feel like the poet is trying to decide whether to run or enjoy the feelings and just take life and love and enjoy the ride. Very good.