Just Once

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Wake up
talk back
don't tell me
what I lack,
save up
turn back
bring along that
fav'rite song
don't tell me
I've no social
conscience
wasting my
poetic licence
turn back
to your real self
your hunger for
poetic justice
look up
the sky's
still higher
than your highest
tower
let down your
flaxen locks
your ivory walls
are too slick
come with me
where the air
is free
and maybe,
just maybe
for once we'll agree.

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Rylan Batten]

I really liked this...the short lines added a sort of quick, hurried tempo, which allowed the meaning to soak in gradually as we read down this line, like we were falling along with the words. Good word choice too, some really went well together. Thanks for posting

--Rylan