warmth

haiku

sake cup to lips

snowflakes flutter, shadows stretch

wood crackles, smoky haze

Reviews

[keith]

reads like my winter mornings
no sake but coffee just because i like it
snowflakes are one thing viewed through the window and another being out there amongst the flutter
my stove is lit 3-4 months crackling
and of course there is a smoky haze
it's how we roll! HA!

powerful write using easy words to express warmth

[redd Brick Keshner]

The warmth is what gets us through!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice flow of words ands thoughts. Coffee is my morning love. A wonderful poem my dear friend.
Coyote

[redd Brick Keshner]

Nothing like a good cup of coffee in the morning!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Now I am limited. I found a good replacement. Seven mushroom and taste like coffee.

[Soren]

A setting of warmth indicates external cold. The comfort of a fire matched with snow is such a traditional dichotomy gives, itself, a sense of comfort. The sake relaxes the whole situation. Such a nice picture.

[redd Brick Keshner]

External and internal warmth do go well together on occasion!
Thanks Soren.

[Aura]

This sounds like a chilly evening where it freezes outside, the fire is lit and people are drinking hot chocolate. It sounds like they are camping. This was nicely penned!

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thanking you kindly. Frederick.

[Aura]

My pleasure

[Chris Shaw]

Nothing like the warmth of a fire when the temperature drops. This Haiku brings some sharp imagery into focus. An out of doors scenario, snow beginning to fall, a person chilled to the bone, in need of a hot drink and waiting for that fire to burst into flame. Heard the crackles and the smoke got in my eyes. Exceptionally well done Frederick.

Chris

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thanks, Chris. Your review is much appreciated. Frederick