that's a wrap!

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

they hugged

and the moon shown

as if on cue

they hugged

and the moon shown

as if on cue

© 2022 redd Brick Keshner

Author's Note

this is a none 5-7-5, aspirative haiku

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duff

They embraced and a new chapter begins. Cut! Nice job Frederick.

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thanks duff. Episodic like many lives these days, mirroring the bingeables of Netflix and the like, .. read more

Ken e Bujold

inspiration point perhaps?

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Could very well be, Ken! A significant point for something and/or for someone, one may venture as fa.. read more

jacob erin-cilberto

the moon has a strong sixth sense.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Cheers j. Thanks kindly.

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Added on September 3, 2022
Last Updated on September 3, 2022

Author

redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia

About

….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..