Moloch's Dagger

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

~ imPRESSions ~

© 2022 redd Brick Keshner

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andrew mitchell

The poem had me thinking of Gladiator and the Roman arena whereby duels to the death are better on.

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Oh yes, that is an image within the realm of this poem's world. Children were among those brutalised.. read more

Chris Shaw

There's alot of playful alliteration here and I do like the shape of your words. Pointed and sharp, always dangerous for a child. Nice one Freds.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

A thousand pardons Chris for the delay in responding to your review. I was meaning to get back to it.. read more

3 Years Ago

Ta Freds and no worries. No Internet is a bloomin curse :)

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Added on October 18, 2022
Last Updated on October 18, 2022

Author

redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia

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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..