a vantaged perch

a vantaged perch

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner


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Paints quite a lovely picture, I love pigeons so I may be a little biased.
I think the formatting could use some work, but that's all.
One thing, the last two lines, for me, didn't flow as well as the rest, but that's a minor criticism.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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redd Brick Keshner

2 Years Ago

Thanks Doug 🙏🏻 Your visit and thoughts are important and well appreciated.

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 Added on November 18, 2023
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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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