Oktoberfest

double limerick

In a town where the mugs overflow,  
With laughter and dance in a row,  
The beer flows like streams,  
And all share their dreams,  
As the autumn leaves flutter and glow.  

A jolly old fellow named Fred,  
Found a giant pretzel instead.  
With a grin on his face,  
He claimed first place,  
In the feast where good cheer’s widely spread! 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Lucky Fred with his giant pretzel...
I wonder if he is all twisted inside like that pretzel, and is getting a moment of relief from the beer.
j.

[redd Brick Keshner]

I too wonder!