Whispers of a Wandering Soul

Whispers of a Wandering Soul

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

A poem is the funeral pyre bright,
Of pulsations once exhumed from the deep,
Now still, yet present in the waning light;
Fueled by the flame of memories we keep.

A poet gathers thought and hope anew,
As golden hours paint the sky’s embrace,
Where burnished hues in quietude imbue
The heart with echoes of a timeless grace.

Poetry, a dream in words unconfined,
Garbed in the hues of longing’s soft caress,
With verses meandering, sweetly entwined,
A tapestry of whispered tenderness.

It takes but one soft whisper, light as air,
To free the wandering soul from despair.

© 2024 redd Brick Keshner


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a poem is freedom for the soul....
I like your sonnets because I barely notice the rhyme, and yet the rhythm is just perfectly timed.
Powerful lyrics.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the guardrails j, attempting to get on that freeway to poetic Utopia.
Every poet who loved your wonderful piece,
great rhythm and rhymes, it improved the flow

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Thanks tumi, your feedback is very useful!
Good stuff, the line "A tapestry of whispered tenderness." is so true, aren't we just trying to create a picture of words. thank you

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Indeed, Dave W. Thank you! Poetry is painting with words and that is a wonderment.

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Added on October 29, 2024
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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..