Time to Live

a renrhyme

In whispers soft, the dawn will break, 
Embrace the light, let shadows flee, 
With every breath, a chance to wake, 
Life’s fleeting dance, a gift to see. 

The world awaits, a canvas wide, 
In whispers soft, the dawn will break, 
With open arms, we rise and ride, 
With every breathe, a chance to wake. 

Through trials faced, the victor’s call, 
Embrace the light, let shadows flee,
From dawn’s first light to evening’s fall, 
Life’s fleeting dance, a gift to see.

Reviews

[Dave W.]

Very good poem, thank you for writing something up lifting, sometimes I am really down and these kind of poem lift my spirits.

[redd Brick Keshner]

My poems aren’t always entirely helpful so this is a good turn for us both. Thank you for reminding me of our capacity to lift others up with our words or at least carry that potential should we choose to.