Some things are more important than poems!

Some things are more important than poems!

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner
"

Pantoum.

"

Some things hold more weight than verses, 

An infant crying to be fed, 

The dog that barks and strains our purses, 

Kettle boils, thoughts left unsaid.


An infant crying to be fed, 

The talk shows rant, elections scream, 

Kettle boils, thoughts left unsaid, 

Viral clips that haunt our dream.


The talk shows rant, elections scream, 

The flashy meal, now stomach churns, 

Viral clips that haunt our dream, 

And all in life, for poetry yearns.


The flashy meal, now stomach churns, 

The dog that barks and strains our purses, 

And all in life, for poetry yearns, 

Some things hold more weight than verses.

© 2024 redd Brick Keshner


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Hi Brick, those lines that are repeated...there is a purpose?

Posted 1 Year Ago


redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Yeah, pantoum poems have repeated lines probably to reinforce a thought or a feel of a thought, sort.. read more
Ms claws

1 Year Ago

Brilliant. It did just that. Thanks. Ironically, to quiet the baby-a poem(lullaby). To quiet the sto.. read more

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

53 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on November 3, 2024
Last Updated on November 3, 2024

Author

redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



About
….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..