The Snowflakes and the Pine Tree

The Snowflakes and the Pine Tree

A Story by redd Brick Keshner

In a quiet forest, there once stood a proud Pine Tree, boasting to the other trees about its evergreen splendor. "I remain green and resilient all year, unlike you deciduous trees that shed your leaves," it would say. Every year, as winter approached, the Pine Tree anticipated the arrival of snow with a mixture of pride and impatience.


One early winter’s night, a tiny Snowflake drifted down from the sky and landed gently on the Pine Tree’s branch. "Go away, little Snowflake. You’re too delicate and will soon melt away," the Pine Tree grumbled, feeling the cold touch of the Snowflake.


The Snowflake replied softly, "Dear Pine Tree, though I am small and delicate, we snowflakes together can blanket the world in beauty, protecting it with our cold embrace."


The Pine Tree scoffed and shook its branches, causing the Snowflake to fall. Days passed, and the forest was gripped by a harsh, snowless winter. The ground froze hard, the air became bitterly cold, and food became scarce. The animals suffered, struggling to find shelter and warmth. The Pine Tree stood tall but felt the relentless bite of the icy winds, its roots exposed to the harsh elements.


One night, as the Pine Tree shivered in the cold, a strong wind brought an unusual warmth. The Pine Tree looked up to see a thick, dark cloud overhead. It began to snow heavily. Snowflakes fell in abundance, covering the ground, the trees, and the Pine Tree itself. The Pine Tree tried to shake off the snow, but there were too many Snowflakes to dislodge.


Suddenly, the weight of the accumulating snow became unbearable. Branches began to creak and groan under the pressure, bending dangerously close to breaking. The Pine Tree felt a surge of panic, its once proud stance wavering as the branches strained. "Help!" the Pine Tree cried out, "I can't hold much longer!"


Just as the branches seemed on the verge of snapping, a powerful gust of wind roared through the forest. The branches swayed violently, and the snow shifted, tumbling to the ground and relieving some of the immense weight. The Pine Tree sighed in momentary relief but knew the danger had only been temporarily averted.


Meanwhile, the forest’s river began to freeze, cutting off the animals' access to water. Seeing the animals' distress, the Pine Tree called out to the Snowflakes, "We need to help the animals get water."


Understanding the urgency, the Snowflakes worked together to form an icy bridge over the river, allowing the animals to cross safely. The Pine Tree watched in awe, realizing the Snowflakes' resilience and adaptability.


Just as things seemed to calm down, a fierce storm approached, its howling winds threatening to uproot the Pine Tree entirely. The storm's fury intensified, and the Pine Tree braced itself against the onslaught. The Snowflakes clung tightly to the Pine Tree’s roots, forming a protective barrier that held it firmly in place. The storm raged on, but the Pine Tree stood resilient, thanks to the unwavering support of the Snowflakes.


When the storm finally passed, the forest lay peaceful under a serene blanket of snow. The Pine Tree learned to appreciate the Snowflakes, understanding their strength and purpose. From that winter onward, the Pine Tree welcomed the Snowflakes, and they worked together to endure the cold season.

© 2024 redd Brick Keshner


Author's Note

redd Brick Keshner
Moral:
Never underestimate the power and importance of even the smallest things, for they can contribute greatly in ways you might not initially see.

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This is probably the only story I have read of yours Freds. It was magical. I imagined being read to by a log fire on a cold winter’s night. Not only that, there is a moral here too. Story book for children. You have a talent. Would be lovely to have it illustrated as well.

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redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Thanks Chris! 🙏🏻 That would be nice. I have a few others posted here and in other sites as wel.. read more



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This is probably the only story I have read of yours Freds. It was magical. I imagined being read to by a log fire on a cold winter’s night. Not only that, there is a moral here too. Story book for children. You have a talent. Would be lovely to have it illustrated as well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Thanks Chris! 🙏🏻 That would be nice. I have a few others posted here and in other sites as wel.. read more
I really enjoyed this. It felt comforting, like something I would read when I was kid during a cold winter. And I love the moral.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly, yes I do imagine it being read snug in bed or lounge with a hot cup of cocoa at th.. read more

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Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..