near or far of love

All this who-ha about
Distance in relationships
But what of short-distance
Instead of long, or even
Point blank relationships!
Too much space, so-so-ho-hum,
And claustrophobic, let me get
A breathe, tight of chest and
Body parts gone to sleep
Only you can suffer as
Ants crawl on pins and needles;
While all along your love
Looks on with a hurt and
Quizzical look!  So down it goes
You sink in a puddle of woes.
It really don't matter the distance
True love should always pull through.

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

it is not physical distance that strains relationships, it is non-physical. being apart can be hard but it is not impossible. it isn't how close you live but the length of time you spend loving each other. that is what matters most. this verse really gave me something to think about and has given me space to reacknowledge the relationships i continue with my friends back in Oz.

[redd Brick Keshner]

That is so true Ern! It’s all about the connections. Cheers mate 👍🏻

[Coyote Poetry]

We live in a different world my dear friend. My grandparent didn't always agree. But Grandpa told me. Never go to bed angry. They were marry 65 years. I liked the purpose of the poetry. Sometime we must find equal ground. Hold tightly to love. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thank you, my friend, for sharing your thoughts 🙏🏻
Rik

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.