where is home?

where is home?

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

a sail without its wind
prevailing 
       and oars without waters 
deep 
       within heaving chest 
spraying cheeks moist 


© 2024 redd Brick Keshner


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The piece seems to indicate a longing for a destination impossible or out of reach. Thomas Wolf wrote, "We can't go home again" but I don't subscribe to that belief. In fact I believe the opposite; that we all will return home one day and only then will we understand what "home" truly is. Hebrews 11:16 says, "Instead, they were longing for a better country, a heavenly one. Therefore God is not ashamed to be called their God, for He has prepared a city for them." I look forward to returning to that home.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

So true! Thanks Fabian 🙏🏻 Happy New Year 🥳



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The piece seems to indicate a longing for a destination impossible or out of reach. Thomas Wolf wrote, "We can't go home again" but I don't subscribe to that belief. In fact I believe the opposite; that we all will return home one day and only then will we understand what "home" truly is. Hebrews 11:16 says, "Instead, they were longing for a better country, a heavenly one. Therefore God is not ashamed to be called their God, for He has prepared a city for them." I look forward to returning to that home.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

So true! Thanks Fabian 🙏🏻 Happy New Year 🥳

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 Added on December 9, 2024
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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..