where is home?
A Poem by redd Brick Keshner
a sail without its wind
prevailing
and oars without waters
deep
within heaving chest
spraying cheeks moist
© 2024 redd Brick Keshner
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The piece seems to indicate a longing for a destination impossible or out of reach. Thomas Wolf wrote, "We can't go home again" but I don't subscribe to that belief. In fact I believe the opposite; that we all will return home one day and only then will we understand what "home" truly is. Hebrews 11:16 says, "Instead, they were longing for a better country, a heavenly one. Therefore God is not ashamed to be called their God, for He has prepared a city for them." I look forward to returning to that home.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
So true! Thanks Fabian 🙏🏻 Happy New Year 🥳
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The piece seems to indicate a longing for a destination impossible or out of reach. Thomas Wolf wrote, "We can't go home again" but I don't subscribe to that belief. In fact I believe the opposite; that we all will return home one day and only then will we understand what "home" truly is. Hebrews 11:16 says, "Instead, they were longing for a better country, a heavenly one. Therefore God is not ashamed to be called their God, for He has prepared a city for them." I look forward to returning to that home.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
So true! Thanks Fabian 🙏🏻 Happy New Year 🥳
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Added on December 9, 2024
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redd Brick KeshnerBrisbane, West Moreton, Australia
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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kin.. more..
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