Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!

Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

A dragon basks in my stew, scales glinting with heat
Steam curls, weaving tales of daring quests
Potatoes anchor islands, thickening the plot
Carrots float like tiny boats on a spicy sea
Pepper flames flicker, igniting bold flavours
Onions create layers of intrigue
Garlic breathes magic
Stew simmers bold.

Spoon stirs, dragon flares
Bubbles pop with mystery
Savoury secrets blend-
Courage takes a bite.

Spoon dips,
Bowl lifts.

Savour.

© 2025 redd Brick Keshner


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Hello Red,
I love to cook, occasionally.
I love to eat, all the time.
I love your poem.
It reflects both a skillful use of language by a seasoned poet, and a joyful innocent imagination such as a child might possess. More simply, it made me smile, made me want to cook. Nice poem, really! MSB

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Perhaps at a certain age we somehow return to the simpler joys and revisit the basics, like mealtime.. read more



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Hello Red,
I love to cook, occasionally.
I love to eat, all the time.
I love your poem.
It reflects both a skillful use of language by a seasoned poet, and a joyful innocent imagination such as a child might possess. More simply, it made me smile, made me want to cook. Nice poem, really! MSB

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Perhaps at a certain age we somehow return to the simpler joys and revisit the basics, like mealtime.. read more
I love that second stanza, this is amazing
Love the imagery

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Indeed, and so glad you said so yourself! That means that I wasn’t just dreaming it 👍🏻🕊th.. read more
Amazing! the shape of things to come, You cook a tantalizing write! Kudos RB!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Thanks Dylan, a positive forecast is always appreciated as much as you are 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Interesting. A lot of fun.
Sounds good to me. I want a bite,
or a slurp.
lol

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

Tank you so much 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Light and ashes

1 Year Ago

:)) you're very welcome.
How creative this was with great imagery. Although I’d be a bit suspect if a dragon was in my stew! I’m glad the stew was good. I found much symbolism and an unwritten theme in this piece. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

I would too, in it or on it! Glad that you found unbreathed themes and symbolism- that is so amazing.. read more

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Added on January 13, 2025
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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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