cavernous

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   Could vaulted vase

contain collected tears,

  echoing- -with sighs,

   now solidly trapped

    within its chamber

     where this bloom

      ⚱️tears away ⚱️

       defying gravity

       and yesterday?

      ➖➖➖➖➖➖

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Thank the sky, sun and stars.. a moment to reflect your words and learn about self and how the each reader exists for a moment's smile and - that tear, held in space shared perhaps, by strangers but held as secrets by friends. Yesterday's tears are lessons to hold in mind if not in paln, all beautiful hints and help in however is read.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thanks kindly ejg. These are much appreciated words🕊🙏🏻

[emmajoygreen]

Given with nod of a smile.

[redd Brick Keshner]

🤩………….🕊️🙏🏻

[Desert Knave]

May we all have at least one bloom tear away from the vase. ~Jim

[redd Brick Keshner]

That would be good Jim🕊️🙏🏻thank you kindly.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thoughts, memories might one day fly away like dust in the wind.
Loved ones bloom for us like a temporary flower...and then wilt and die.
Pieces of yesterday defying gravity and blowing away...but if that is true, why does the heart feel so heavy.
j.

[redd Brick Keshner]

A wonderful poetic question! It drives me to meditate on this again, j. Thanks kindly🙏🏻🕊read moreA wonderful poetic question! It drives me to meditate on this again, j. Thanks kindly🙏🏻🕊
Freds.

[redd Brick Keshner]

A wonderful poetic question! It drives me to meditate on this again, j. Thanks kindly🙏🏻🕊read moreA wonderful poetic question! It drives me to meditate on this again, j. Thanks kindly🙏🏻🕊
Freds.

[Lorry]

Yes. Vaulted vase collecting tears of yesterday. Never spilling, but collected in memory of what came before them.
Nicely captured, although could only read it by clicking on the pic due to formatting.

[redd Brick Keshner]

I know, Lorry; it can be annoying attempting to format poems as one could on a piece of paper. Thank you for clicking on the pic to get the entire picture. Most appreciated 🕊🙏🏻

[Lorry]

Well, whatever you did it's looking better now. 😃