June 14, 2010: journal entry

June 14, 2010: journal entry

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

Her laughter in the kitchen sounded like

it had learnt the language of eucalyptus.

Then, Miss Kay asked why clouds don’t fall.


I said something about warmth and altitude,

but thought of grace instead.

This morning I read from Ecclesiastes,


then wrote half a stanza about shadows falling inward.

The kettle hissed, I answered.

Not the poem-- but the Day.

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© 2025 redd Brick Keshner


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Strangely enough, I just watched an episode of startalk, where Neil Degrasse Tyson explained that very thing - why clouds don't fall, and I still couldn't tell you why. Think it had something to do with humidity.
But hey, if you'd have known that you wouldn't have ended up with that journal entry! 😃

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

9 Months Ago

True, Lorry, so true 🕊🙏🏻



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Strangely enough, I just watched an episode of startalk, where Neil Degrasse Tyson explained that very thing - why clouds don't fall, and I still couldn't tell you why. Think it had something to do with humidity.
But hey, if you'd have known that you wouldn't have ended up with that journal entry! 😃

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

9 Months Ago

True, Lorry, so true 🕊🙏🏻
Nine lines of pure delight! Well done my friend. MSB

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

9 Months Ago

Thanks MSB, means a lot 🕊️🙏🏻
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/iframe> ….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kin.. more..