taking up arms

"Taking Up Arms" ( © 2001 ) ` War is come upon us, imposing our timid nation to rise up and take arms. I will march off along with the rest of your sons to that sea of blood, Supplied by the rivers of our throbbing wounds; while honour and patriotism collide in barbaric swill - Tearing open our bodies in those fields of hate in that cold strange land. This war is not our own; We did not ask for this. But as sons of our Fatherland, we march off to war - to fill that crimson sea.

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Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Ha, fatherland? You sound, Adolfian.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Read it again. Then reconsider the kneejerk reaction dude

[Davidgeo]

Relax man. It's not that serious. You should play off the humor. Poetry is already too self serious by nature.

[redd Brick Keshner]

We are humorous but there are others around that aren't. All good.

[Davidgeo]

You control how you interact with people here. Take that too seriously and you're going to have a bad time. It's not on other people, it's on you how you experience the world. Being sensitive on a writing site while writing poetry, ha... good luck buddy.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Need it as you can see. Never had run 🏃 ins with you, though. So still good. We good?

[Davidgeo]

Good? Sure dude. Whatever you say.