Old Toy

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as a child once to a favoured toy
countless hours of pristine joy
but specifications of "growed up" ploy
memories of past pleasures now destroy

 

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Reviews

[awkward turtle]

woah. there seems to be a lot in this; much more than meets the eye, you might say. literally. i feel like if this were an art piece, it would be huge, and when you got close, every letter would be made up of smaller words. feelings, thoughts...something that told the rest of the story. is that weird? maybe. but i like what you have here. bravo.